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Listen "619: Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 3): How Reflection Leads to Insight with Alisha, HS Senior"
Episode Synopsis
Hey friends, and welcome back to the College Essay Guy podcast. Today's episode is the third and final episode in our series called Inside the Personal Statement Process. If you're just tuning in, this series takes you behind the scenes as I work one-on-one with Alisha, a current high school senior applying for the Fall 2026 term. Find Part 1 here and Part 2 here. This episode was recorded just a few days before Alisha submitted her early applications. The focus of this episode is on one of the most challenging—and perhaps, the least discussed—aspect of writing the personal statement: insight. In the session, Alisha and I explore: What is insight? How do you find good insights? What are the kinds of questions that can lead to insights? And more Whether you're a student working on your own essays right now, a parent supporting from the sidelines, or a counselor guiding students through this process, I hope you'll find something useful here. Alisha is a current high school senior going through the application process who loves science, movies, and discovering new places. When she's not studying the brain, she's mentoring younger students through her program Running Start or planning her next adventure. Hope you enjoy our session. Play-by-Play: 1:16 – It's just days before her Early Decision deadline. How's Alisha feeling? 2:21 – What is "insight," and why does it matter in an essay? 3:30 – Alisha begins reading her latest draft, Wherever the Road Takes Us 4:08 – Ethan gives his thoughts on Alisha's intro 5:37 – Paragraph one: Curiosity 11:04 – Paragraph two: Creativity 11:52 – How does art make Alisha a better scientist? 14:20 – Paragraph three: Empathy 21:20 – Alisha uses the Values Exercise to identify potential new insights 28:19 – Paragraph four: Community 32:47 – Paragraph five: Conclusion and the "empty jar." 35:53 – Ethan recaps final notes and next steps 39:50 – Alisha and Ethan reflects on the writing process and Alisha's growth 41:34 – Closing thoughts Resources: Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 1): The Sand Essay with Alisha, HS Senior Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 2): Discovering Values Through Revision with Alisha, HS Senior The Values Exercise College Essay Guy's Personal Statement Resources College Essay Guy's College Application Hub
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